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lchristopher's avatar

Cinnamon light. Goddamn, son.

Trevor Cohen's avatar

Thanks, brother! It's a warm one :)

Gregory Blair's avatar

My god, this is fabulous!

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Thanks Gregory!! You are fabulous 😊 Appreciate you reading!

Tofee61's avatar

good poem, I liked reading it.

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Thank you Tofee!!

Ray Sweatman's avatar

Wonderful!

Trevor Cohen's avatar

Appreciate you reading and sharing! Super kind :)

troy adkins's avatar

potent. great work

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Thanks for reading Troy!!

Laura Teodorescu's avatar

"A scream

the only letter in its alphabet."

Loved that!

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Thank you Laura! Appreciate you reading 😊

Deborah French Frisher's avatar

"...an airplane/hurling over a world/sleeping through another war..."-- oof!

"...and people call me by the first sound i ever made"-- the beauty of this. Thank you, Trevor. I look forward to feeling, yes feeling your new mini-series of poems.

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Thank you, sweet Deborah! So glad you enjoyed it :)