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book inc's avatar

Love this!

Trevor Cohen's avatar

Yay! 😊 Thanks for reading!

Deborah French Frisher's avatar

I would read anything by the writer of these first two paragraphs, unsparing character details, their dialogue opening things out, and "...as the breeze shook the wizened apple trees..." It's a pow! introduction, Trevor!

Alex Shifman's avatar

Two paragraphs in and I know I’d devour this shit

Trevor Cohen's avatar

Thanks man! Really appreciate that. I’ll def request a beta read from you then, down the line

williamphaynes/elliott's avatar

Don't mind the wasps, hate the bats

Trevor Cohen's avatar

Haha! Gotta check the rafter.

Anastasiia Shafran's avatar

I am very fittingly reading this from Germany. Fits the vibe perfectly 🙌🏻

Trevor Cohen's avatar

Amazing! Thank you for reading. Glad you got to experience this section in country. Are you on vacation? Also, how is your novel coming along? I’m excited for the release your Spill Your Dreams piece soon :)

Anastasiia Shafran's avatar

On vacation indeed, hopping between cafés, editing a piece 👀

The novel is on a small pause to finish the novelette - actually an alternative version of the Spill Your Dreams idea.

Very excited to see what everyone came up with for final drafts!

Trevor Cohen's avatar

Oh! Cool. Yeah that’s a fun premise. Seems like you could do a lot with it

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Mar 20
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Trevor Cohen's avatar

Thanks RM!! Appreciate you :)